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Stacey Lane
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- I have taught Journalism, Creative Writing and advised Young Reporters throughout the Valley for the past 12 years. I am a freelance writer for the Education, Social and Community Pages with Independent Newspapers. My students write and submit stories to Independent Newspapers' Write to Report Program, Bear Essential News for Kids -Young Reporters Program, EduKid Newspapers and In the Zona. I enjoy teaching, photography and watching writers grow as they master their new found skills... Explore the Power of Personal Expression - visit, Write On! Creative Writing Workshops on Facebook
“Frenchy”
ReplyDeleteBy Chantal N.
I walked in scared as I have ever been! Worried no one would like me because of the way I dressed or the way I looked. Though I had my best friend Lauren I was still scared what would happen. I thought The worst would happen though it really didn’t, in fact if anything it was the complete opposite, but not at first.
It was an athletic camp. If you know me at all you know I am not athletic at all!!!!!!! I was so bad in the beginning even my best friend thought it was funny! I was really embarrassed though over time just like everything and everyone you start out small, but then get better and better and better and better. Soon I was a camp favorite and even won an award!
How I got my nickname was the way I acted. I am a quarter French and have a French name. They liked the way I was and decided my nick name would be “Frenchy”, the French girl. The name stuck and here I am “Frenchy”.
Worrier
ReplyDeleteBy Nicole M.
I never said I was a worrier.
I always felt it inside.
During school my friends tell me I’m worrying to much.
I would have to agree with them.
Every class I don’t think I have everything but truly I do.
When I have a crush on a boy I am worried he will talk to me and I’ll freeze up.
Sometimes with a test I will always study but I get worried and I fail.
And then it feels like I have a tail that won’t get off me
It will just deep following me around.
Like I said I’M NOT A WORRIER!
By Nicole M.
ReplyDeleteloud crashing spirit
mist rising through the god's sky
relaxation times
waterfalls
puddles behind me
the cold wind freezing my head
wondering what's wrong
my broken heart has fallen
I now know it was a boy
Sadness
friends
they're there for you
always give you comfort
I love my friends when I have broke
kindness
Friends
By Emily A.
ReplyDeleteChapter 1
Me and Jassy
“Mom have you seen my favorite blue shoes?” Jasmine yelled from her room. “No have you checked in the laundry room?” mom asked. All of a sudden out of no where, I walked up.
Who’s I you ask. Well I am the fierce and mighty bull dog. My name is Rascal and I’m a very helpful dog. Jasmine is my best friend I have ever had. I met her in the pet store when I was snoozing away. She tapped my glass and I woke up. She says “When I first saw you, you were like a shine in my eye. A beauty in my heart. I knew it was you.” Anyway back to the story.
There I was standing right next to Jasmine. And in my mouth was bright blue shoes that she was missing. I dropped them and they fell out of my jaws. Jasmine started staring and finally she spoke up. “Rascal did you find these bright blue new shoes for me.” I said nothing and well I say that worked the magic. She bent down and started praising me.
When she actually stopped she turned around and walked to her bed to put them on. I wondered where she was going. Turns out she was just going to the market to get some food for her and some food for me. They got back around lunch time when we both needed food urgently. I couldn’t wait when she got home to jump on her and lick her face. You know she lets me do that most of the time.
I did just that. Jumped on her licked her face. The usual dog stuff. Immediately without being told to or anything she went right to my food bowl and filled it up right to the top. Since she loves me so much she put me before her because I say that, you ask because she was starving as much as I was. When I was done with my food I went and sat right next to Jasmine and waited for her to be done with her lunch. I didn’t whine so she gave me a little tiny bite of her sandwich since I was such a good boy.
As soon as she was done eating she took me out to use the restroom. She stayed out there with me so I don’t get lonely or she will be sad. Or another reason she said was because she wanted me to stay safe. When I was done doing my business she tossed some toys to me. A couple of years ago she taught me how to play fetch. So we did that as well.
Man was I tired after that. I mean I love her so much she keeps me so healthy and active. Since I was so tired we went through the sliding glass doors into the living room. The living room is where me and Jasmine relax or she tells me all of her secrets or talks to me about something in her life that is going on. I happen to be the worlds great secret keeper.
We were in the living room when she wanted to relax. I figured that out when she turned on the T.V. and sat on the couch. I was just about to lay on the floor when she told me to hop up on the couch with her. Apparently she thought I was cold so she grabbed the warmest blanket we have and put it on me. I had no problem with that what so ever. When we started watching T.V. it was around 12:45. Sometimes we have problems about watching a little to much T.V. and this time that had to happen. We stopped at 2:00. After that we had nothing else to do. She told me “Rascal what do you like to do.” I thought for a while and led her to my secret passage.
I had never told her about my secret passage ever before. I don’t think she has ever been bored with me. Since she was I had to show her. So we walked up the stairs. Down the hall. Into my room and walah.
**** Please post a request for the rest of this story in comments!
Stacey L.
ReplyDeleteAdvisor RSPS
I am a teacher, mother, grandmother, swimmer, writer and dancer.
Relative of Katie, Ryan, Trystan and Tatum.
Lover of Chocolate.
I feel special, crafty and clever.
I need love, attention and frozen dots.
I fear large barking dogs, slipping and falling and fear itself.
I give hugs, kisses and unwanted advice.
I would like to see less judgement, more kindness and my son more.
Resident of Phoenix -
My last name is Lane.
Autobio
ReplyDeleteby Lindsey E.
RSPS
First Name: Lindsey
I am: sweet and helping
Relative of: many siblings and great people
Lover of: animals and cheerleading
I feel: happy, excited, and hyper
I need: love, family, and books
I fear: bugs, heights, and sickness
I give: help, love, and kindness
I would like to see: other states, Grand Canyon, and beautiful scenery
Note: This story is in development, there will be more to come... stay tuned!
ReplyDeleteBy Charlotte R.
All Saints
Chapter 1
The Greatest Little Town
There was once a small town and its name was the Little Old Cherry Town. There was one house that was a store underneath and an apartment on top. It was a cherry factory. Mr. and Mrs. Quintuple owned it and cared for their children except for one. Their 10 year old Sierna. All they ever made her do was work. “Pull those cherries! Clean the bathrooms! Dust the furniture! Do the dishes! Make the beds! Run the store today! Watch the kids for a week!” And so on. Mr. and Mrs. Quintuple were very rich and they had an enormous house! It was full of riches and gold. They all had great bedrooms except for Sierna. She slept on a pile of cow manure in the stables. She always slept in the large manger though. Because who wants to sleep on cow poop! Anyway she loved the animals. But most of all the turtle. She named it Tom and kept it as a pet and stole a glass bowl from the house and then filled it up with water. She found a nearby pond and collected pebbles for the bottom the tank. She bought turtle feed with a golden coin she stole from her mom’s purse. She was really quite rich! Sierna liked to go into the open world though besides doing chores and sleeping on cow poop! Her favorite apartment/store was Shoes, But No Boos! That was her favorite store because since her best friend lived there everything for her was half price! She loved to play with her best friend Mirabella! But her parents wouldn’t let her so when she went out she either sneaked out or tricked her parents. She also loved that place because every time she visited their ½ home she always got $1,000 in gold coins from them. So she was really quite rich too! She always bought one of their finest necklaces! They had ones with rubies, and diamonds, silver, gold, amethysts, emeralds, and pearls, and mountains of sparkling jewels!! But every day she tried to be the first customer at the shop, but someone had always already taken the golden locket. Mostly it was out of stock though. She longed of a golden locket. One that would hang around her neck like all the other braggy girls in her school. They would all say to Sierna “My locket has every jewel of all kinds stored inside of it and I just got a video game set with controllers and a Super Mario Brothers game for it! Ha! How lucky am I!” Then all the other girls would say” We got that too! From your mom! Yes, how lucky you are!” Sierna always felt lacks of kindliness! But they were that type. Sierna always called The Little Cherry Town “The Greatest Little Town”. It was because it was full of adventure! But she still always longed for a new adventure. She would want to fight with the swords of Sir Arthur! And discover a magical new land of fun and adventure!!
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Later that same evening Sierna got a letter. Sierna had never gotten a letter before so when she was about to open it her mother and father came in.
Sierna grinned and then it vanished. Her mom snatched the letter away from her and threw it in the fire. But Sierna saw a jungle and Sir Arthur! There was a magical land full of sparkles! She wondered what it was…………
That night Sierna stayed up late building a shed for her to sleep in with a comfortable bed, furniture, a grill, food, books, and other accessories such as a heat lamp. I n her new shed Sierna lay there thinking about tomorrow. For it was her birthday. She wondered if she would get the golden locket she always had desired of. Would she ever have it was the question………
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That same night the fire was flickering in the cherry factory and it looked like people were going to burst out of it and people did. But not just average people, people from the past and before time, even before dinosaurs and even before heaven.
Chapter 2
ReplyDeleteBy Charlotte R.
A Gift for Sierna
“Happy Birthday Sierna!” Mirabella and her mom shouted as she entered Shoes no Boos even though it was closed. Sierna was startled at their loud scream but happy! Mirabella showed her the gift table. It had 20 presents all for Sierna! Sierna was marveled! First Sierna ate her cake. It was her favorite type. Mint cake inside and vanilla frosting with bits of chocolate on the outside. She gobbled it up as fast as a wood pecker pecking a tree! Now it was time for Sierna’s favorite part…………………………………………………………………………………………….. PRESENTS!!!!!!!! She mostly loved the presents today because she might get the golden locket. So Sierna ripped open the wrapping paper on all of them in search for a locket but found none. When Mirabella found that Sierna was sad she ran into the jewelry section of the store! Sierna knew what this meant! The golden locket! As soon as Mirabella came back with a small bag Sierna peeked inside of it but nothing in there was to be found. As Sierna was about to cry some magical golden sparks suddenly burst out of the bag!! Sierna and Mirabella both gasped in surprise! Sierna looked inside again and there right before her eyes was the golden locket!!!! Sierna cried with tears of joy! She thanked Mirabella greatly! But, Mirabella looked confused? They were out of stock on the golden locket and Mirabella had put in a locket that was gold and the outside trimmings were jewels of all kinds. Although Sierna would’ve liked that she was just thankful she got one because her parents wouldn’t even have gotten her a rope with some paper on it!!
§Meanwhile§
At night as Sierna was sleeping her locket was glowing a bit but then it sparked. Then it shook! It then burst open with a colorful scene full of dragons and knights and evil villains, royal folk, angels, and even the famous old coopity coopy Duke. And of course their leader, Sir Arthur. And Arthurs leader was God. They searched the strange room until a little angel named Gabriella squeaked “Look a human! I’ve never seen anything so strange!” Queen Elizabeth scolded “Ah! You little nugwit! I’m a human! And humans are normal! Not pesky little creatures that go out with those flappity- flaps of yours and tell fortunes! Hmph!”
“Oh Yeah! Well at least I don’t have to walk! And I’m an angel thank you very much! Hmph to you too! Whatever that means!” Sir Arthur lectured” Are we done with our little argument here Lady Gabriella and Queen Lizzy. Good! Now Fairy Mc.Nancy Mary you will shrink Sierna so she fits in the locket and then we all jump in followed by the Sugar Plum fairy who will carry Sierna. Got it! Good!” And that is just what they did.
Although Sierna slept through all of this she did dream it. She thought it was a pleasant dream in fact. But, Sierna knew, she just knew, things that aren’t good were going to happen. She may lose a friend right before her eyes or almost die. She may have things happen she would never have wanted to happen. But she knew they would. She just knew.
§Meanwhile§
Back over at Mirabella’s house Mirabella was mixing, mixing liquids of uncertain species. There were thousands and thousands of secrets about Mirabella that Sierna didn’t know. For instance Mirabella- is- a- under-cover-secret-agent/spy- alien. Sierna needed to know a lot of things about Mirabella to survive a mystical land as in: where she was heading for.
Chapter 3
ReplyDeleteBy Charlotte R.
A New Place, Home, and Adventure
A-ring! A-ring! A-ring! Screamed Sierna’s alarm clock. She went into the nearby breakfast place in Wonder Ville just as she would start out her normal everyday morn- Wait! Thought Sierna. (We are now switching into Sierna’s view!)I don’t belong here! I’m supposed to be in a tacky ol-
“Wait Sierna! You mean in the Greatest Old Little Town! Go ahead start over! We have time!”
“Oh yeah! Sorry director! Make that continuing!”
(We are very sorry for this little interruption. You may now continue reading the story! Enjoy and buy some homemade popcorn please! Free ice-cream! Get your free ice-cream right here! Um, sorry. Enjoy! Heh, heh, huh. Uh.h.)
-I don’t belong here! I’m supposed to be in the Greatest Old Little Town! Oh no! I bet I’ve been abandoned because my parents hate me so much! I bet I’m killed and they put me in a different continent but in heaven!
§Meanwhile§
Sierna’s parents were very worried especially Mrs. Quintuple. “Oh no where is our precious little daughter it is like she has been abandoned! What shall we do?! We must call the police! Oh no! What to do, what to do, what to do!? Boo,hoo, hoo! Oh, dear Lord, I am so sorry for everything I’ve done with my daughter! I can change! Please! I can change!” All of a sudden God appeared in front of her! “Well, well, well. What do we have here?” God said in a booming voice. “Another horrible treater eh? Well, I can fix that! You shall have your daughter back in, let’s see, 1, 2, 3,……. In one year!” “But, but,” “Silence! I will take no excuses!” Then he vanished. Mrs. Quintuple questioned “Honey? Did you see that? God spoke to me!” “Hm. Oh what? I was reading the paper. No I didn’t see that.” “You nugwit! Get your eyes checked! Ugh!”
*Back in Wonder Ville*
Sierna was confused as she walked into the LV Diner and saw all of the characters from movies and cartoons that were the pictures and people from the past and before God.
Back in WonderVille continued... By C.R.
ReplyDelete*Back in Wonder Ville*
I was confused as I walked into the LV Diner and saw all of the characters from movies and cartoons that were the pictures and people from the past and before God. What am I doing here! I miss all of my best friends! Or at least my BFF! Garfield actually wasn’t craving lasagna for the first time though!? I couldn’t help but also be a little exited that I was actually meeting all of my favorite characters for the very first time though.
“What on earth!, I mean on heaven am I doing here!” King Arthur spoke up “Well, two things. First, you’re not in heaven, you’re in your locket but your locket is on earth. So technically you are not in heaven. Second of all, you long for a new adventure. So, here you are now going to have a new adventure! Happy? Oh yeah, Happy Birthday Sierna!! You’re 11!” What on earth! I said” Answer to the first question: Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Answer to your second question: What the heck!? Ok, just tell me every detail and I will answer. Ok?” Sir Arthur said”Ok. You longed for a new adventure. When you got your locket on your birthday we made the special one disappear and we put a plain one there and we were inside of it. At night we shrinked you so you could fit inside the locket world. Clear?” “Clear.” I said.
Jerry squeaked” Well come on now we don’t have all day!” “ To do what?” I asked. “ To get to the magical and adventurous world called Avator.’ “Oh!” I said. At that point I was swept into a wharl pool! But when I came out I could fly without wings! I also had blue skin with little pink spots! How weird! But, for the adventurous land! I still did have my same hair though! “ Huh, your new home for a year Sierna. How ‘bout that!” said Sir Arthur. I didn’t say anything I just grinned. A little angel named Gabriella then said to me “Hi. I’m Gabriella the angel. Wanna be friends? You’ll need one on the long journey! I said “OK.” And then we walked off along the dirt road to Avator for my adventure birthday present. But I kept wondering what the new land would be like. And did Mirabella miss me or worry? I have mind reading powers! But Mirabella wasn’t worried at all! But, she was an alien! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I screamed at the top of my lungs! I nearly fainted! Gabriella asked “What’s wrong!!!?” I said “My best friends an alien. Eek! Oh no!” Gabriella said “I know. You needed to know more about her to survive this land! friends an alien. Eek! Oh no!” Gabriella said “I know. You needed to know more about her to survive this land! You won’t be able to read her min anymore though. It’s because she has stopped you from reading her mind.” But I said curiously “How do you Know?!” Gabriella said “Watch birds gave me letters on what she’s doing. Ope. They’re gone now!” I sighed. This was going to be a long year!
Chapter 4 By. C.R.
ReplyDeleteChapter 4
The Long Journey
I was very happy as I walked along the silent alley with all of my new friends. But I am so curious! I then asked Indiana Jones “Where are we??” He answered back “Well little critter looks like we’re on the west side of mountain springs so that must mean we’re in……........ New Bamshire!” “What!!! You mean New Hampshire don’t you?” I said. “Nope! I mean New Bamshire!” “What! Tell me what New Bamshire is.” “Well, New Bamshire is one of the states th-“ I exaggerated “What! I can’t go through a state!!! ” “Let me finish. New Bamshire is one of the 7 states you are going to have to go through if you would like to get to Avator. New Bamshire is named the land of firecrackers. And the firecrackers really are on fire and after they catch fire they explode.! The bam part in New Bamshire is the sound of what the firecrackers make. New Bamshire is about 25 miles long. But you can fly unlike me. I swing and jump about the vines. ‘cause of course, I am Indiana Jones! Clear?” “Clear,” I said “But one more question.” “What is that my hearty?” “When are we going to be there?”
Indiana Jones chuckled. “Well look ahead of you sweet ‘eart!” I stared and right in front of me was a singed sign that said:
New Bamshire
6 months until Avator
Here we go. I said to myself. I had no clue what was in for me! I swung my bag over my shoulder and stiff- legged walked into the cool, dark hollow forest with trees that made an arch over me all the way through. There were strange flickering holes everywhere and I suddenly realized that if anything went over it a firecracker must shoot out of it. But as I dodged the first hollow pit the fire cracker went straight at me! I quickly ran back to the entrance with the rest of my friends. I guess there was no escaping in New Bamshire because some gates closed the entrance and the firecracker pits started edging toward us like little pot holes. Indiana Jones handed everyone ropes and Sir Arthur gave us all belt loop swords covered in shimmering rubies as a decoration. I put the sword in my belt loop and grabbed the rope. I ran a ways and then soared through the like the wind! The firecrackers started to emerge but I was too quick for them!! I swung my rope around the vine that went through the whole forest and rode on it like a zip-line! I was rejoicing as I dodged all the firecrackers with Gabriella flying by my side!
As I was half way through the forest a firecracker almost touched my foot and it did. I was screaming like crazy! But then I noticed that the fire was gone in two seconds. I guess I had fire proof skin! “Whoopee!” I shouted. My ghost of the past caught up to me and said this in an echoy voice “Beeeee carefullll! Your skiin will onlyyyy be fire prooooof for as long as yoooou, beleeeeiiiive in yourselfff!” I knew what, I knew what she meant. I had to not ever give up and believe I could make my dreams come true.
After I dodged the last fire cracker I found that we would have to camp- out for the night because Sir Arthur had set up a tent for us because we were all very tired. And we had to find a way to break through the gate. I slept in a separate tent with Gabriella because the other one was too full. I lay awake that night praying that I would not get hurt.
The next morning I found that a sledge hammer was whacking the gates. But then I noticed a sensor for the head! I then said “Wait! Stop! Let me!” So I then walked up to the head sensor I put my head on it and it said “Sorry, head print incorrect.” So I put my back on it and it said “Head print correct! Head print correct!” Then it opened the large gates and we all ran through the large, old, tarnished silver gates before they closed again. We all rejoiced and ran through Chocolate Forest for the second state was among us.
Chapter 4 continued
ReplyDeleteI got tired of walking when we were 2 miles through the forest. So I stretched a bit leaped forward and I was soaring through the sky! Of course everybody else joined in! But all of a sudden we all felt a chill of cold air! There were icicles everywhere and I asked “Where are we?” Lewis answered “We are in Bobble Bucki….?” Clarke said “There’s no such thing as Bobble Bucki! We are in Tennessbee!” I answered that in a cinch! “Oh! Is it a place where extremely painful bees live only in the cold. And plus they play tennis too whack you with them! But the tennis balls are covered in slime! Which will distract you and the bees can sting you! And then they put you in quicksand! And the exit is as small as a grain of sand. So you have to drink an extreme disgusting potion to get through! Am I right?? !!” “Yes indeed you are.” said Sir Arthur. “In fact! We’re here right now!” And indeed we were!
I looked ahead of me and there was a sign that said:
Tennessbee
5 months ‘til Avator
I was glad we had 5 more months to go! But then I saw something else.
By Car
I was disappointed. But I still had to move on!
I entered the dark tunnel of deadly hives and buzz’s. As I stepped forward to the first hive a swarm of flickering bees came shooting at me! I took out my whip and smacked most of the bees! But they tried to smack me with their tennis balls too! So I whacked them even harder! Unfortunately I got stung by two bees and hit by 1 ball. But I didn’t care! But I did quickly push off the tennis ball. As soon as I was finished killing all of the bees the king bee approached me like he was God or something! He said “Here, ye! Here, ye! I am King Beezus the king of all bees! You have killed all the citizens of Tennessbee so you are here by abandoned from Tennessbee. I said “We were just leaving as a matter of fact.” “Well,” said King Beezus. “You have 2 minutes to figure out a way to get through the tiny door!” And I said “Pwah! All I have to do is drink a disgusting potion!” The King declared “Without drinking potions!”Then Beezus turned away and set his pocket watch to two minutes and pressed start.
I gasped and quickly snatched a hammer from the Big Bad Wolf and started whacking at the solid metal wall. I then realized it was no use. We were doomed! As I was thinking I spotted a bee stinger! It was a punishment the King would use on bees! He shot the little arrow at them and they would have their wings broken! And sometimes even faint! It was really dusty and I wasn’t sure it would work. But I had to give it a try! So I quickly snatched the timer away from the King and stomped on it so it was quickly broken. Then I took the Bee Stinger dusted it off and quickly put in new batteries. Plus with the help of my friends we managed to put some stingers in the filling. While the King was not looking we shot the arrow at him! He fell down flat on his back with vultures and flies circling around him. Each of us each took a bottle of shrinking potion and gulped it down quickly. Since it only lasted 30 seconds we all quickly ran through the doorway and turned back to normal size. Our next obstacle was 12 miles away so we set up a campout but we then took it back down because we discovered a friendly hotel that gave us an enormous sweet for all of us. My bed was the coziest white bed ever. And I also had a miniature fridge with all kinds of drinks and candies.
There was also a letter for me. This is what it read:
ReplyDeleteDear Sierna,
I miss you so much! Now listen. I have one thing I need to tell you. Since I am an alien I know all about the future and where you are and dad li dad li day. So I want to tell you that you are in great danger. Don’t go on. Either stay there and get yourself beaten up! Or come back here with me and become an alien! It’s your decision, but I recon you come home. If not. I would like to become friends with you.
OK! Sorry about that! My boss was in here and he wants me to make you an alien too! But seriously! I want to be best friends with you! Please! Talk to me somehow here! Just use your ability to travel to places in one second! Please! Come here! We will just make treaty to be bestest friends again! I’ll do anything! OK. Come over to my house at 6:00 p.m. tomorrow night. Come another night if you need to. I’ll know!
Yours Truly,
Mirabella
I was a little surprised by this strange message but anyone could trust a great friend like Mirabella right? Wrong! I bet she set this up! Oh well, I won’t go to her house not until the second I get back to The Greatest Little Town!
“U-“
“NO DIRECTOR I WILL NOT DO ANYMORE CHANGES! I AM REALLY ANGRY RIGHT NOW SO DON’T MESS WITH ME SISTER!”
What will happen tomorrow?
“Whah!” I said in a tired voice as I woke up. I suddenly realized that I needed to pack up because today I was going to Trollgeon. Trollgeon was a land that was full of humongous trolls that stomped nonstop and tried to catch you in mid air! They are faster than a leaping leprechaun on fast whizzing Nimbus 2009 broomstick from Harry Potter! I quickly put a Nimbus 2010 broomstick in my backpack so I could be very fast! I also grabbed some hockey gear for protection.
It took 6 hours but we finally got to Trollgeon. Before I took my first step I put on my hockey gear and sat on my broomstick. When I arose the 1 million trolls went crazy and chased after me! It was very hard. I kept on getting the ends of my broomstick stick in their ear, or their nose. Ick! Finally I got caught in a trolls mouth and he digested me. As I was searching the trolls stomach I heard broomsticks coming. I held out my siccors and said “Who’s there?” in a scared voice. But it was just my friends rescuing me. There was only one way out though: through the biggest and hairiest wart! I got out my screw driver and poked a hole in the wart. It was large so we all climbed through and fell on the ground. Then we quickly jumped on our broomsticks and headed for the EXIT. When we got through the white door, we were in a spaceship. I then said “Where are we going?” Then a soft women’s voice said “You are now entering part 2 of your journey to the 7th state which after that you will be in Avator.” After we all heard that we said “Ahhhhhhhh!” But in a cheerful manner. We were heading toward part two of my birthday gift. So it must be the first day of March.
Chapter 5 By Charlotte R.
ReplyDeleteThe Future Part 2 of the Long Journey
I was very excited as it was March 2nd and we were heading toward “The Future” at least that’s what the voice called it! When we finally arrived it felt different. I looked around and there were life sized robots and time travel machines, houses made of unusual things, money grew on trees and all of the people were dressed as robots. I guess it must be some special holiday that we will eventually celebrate!
We were ½ of a mile until we got to our first state in the future. Robot World. It sounded interesting.? And it was. We had to get through robots with fire rocket powered blasters on their metal backs and pinching claws that snatch you up and through in a witch’s cauldron that is 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 Celsius! Which is even hotter then farenhight! The second you touch the tips of your toes in that pot you’re dead! Even with every power imaginable! But good thing I was prepared. I brought rocket blasters to wear that were powered by the sun and 50 billion rockets. I also brought pocket knives and other sharp things. Plus I bought a power-downer which is used only if I need to, to power down the robots for a week. It could be handy! I then saw a sign:
Rosot Worder
7 mowths ol Avator
I had no clue what it meant. But a friend of ours Nice Future Robot. Translated it for us:
Robot World
3 months until Avator
I felt a little bit better after that!! As were entering I noticed they weren’t that fast! They were just walking around as slow as a turtle! But just in case I put all of my supplies in my belt loop and put on my rocket blasters. Then when I went in I expected them to start charging at me they weren’t I was about to be dropped into the witch’s cauldron! So were all my friends! Even all our gear was gone! I then remembered my mind reading skills! I read the witch’s mind and she didn’t want to make us die because she loved us! I then told her this “It’s OK! You don’t have to kill us we know you love us! Just hand me that little silver thing there and I will make the robots power down for a week!” The old witch handed it to me and put me back on the ground. She then said “I can smash the robots while they are powered down too! Can I join you on your adventure? You can trust me!” She then took off her cloak and she was a beautiful straight red head with a long black robe on with a little flag that was yellow and red and said GRIFINDOR. She then said “Jinney. That’s my name. Jinney Weasly. From Harry Potter.” We then could all trust her!
After a while all of the robots were powered down and we headed through an exit to the hottest desert on earth! We all ripped off our clothes except me. I was perfectly fine. But I was prepared for the rest. I stuck ‘em in a car that was 32 farenheight.
We were finally at the next state when I saw the sign:
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Automatically I knew what it meant. It was a desert but it was a big candy land that was hot and thorny. Thornys are creatures that chase you and try to poke you with their poisonous thorns. The only way to stop the poisonous is to stick your arm or any part of your body into a bucket of ice. And the Thornys hate anything that is just a bit chilly! They melt if they are put in something lower than 32 degrees farenhight.
When we entered Thorny Dessert I was startled by all of the wonderful and colorful desserts surrounding me! While I was in a dessert heaven three Thornys popped out of nowhere!! :-0 I quickly pulled out my plastic cover- up that could prevent me from being poked. But I knew I had not enough time to put it on. So I quickly grabbed my sword and started to fight the ten Thornys of the Dessert. I saw that I would have to do this alone because all of my friends were sweating and had their tongues hanging out like a dog. For a moment Gabriella came out and helped me. But it wasn’t worth for her to come out.. She got poked by a Thorny. I gasped in horror while Gabriella screamed and cried thinking she was going to die. But she wasn’t! I was going to make a 5 second freezing cold water!! So quickly gathered these things before her 5 minutes was up:
1 large bucket
ice cubes made of frozen solid sugar water
a special stick for putting into the body
First you pour in all of the 50 sugar water ice cubes into the large bucket.
Then you take the special stick. You put the persons part of the body into the bucket and take the special stick and scrape out all of the poisonous.
Now your friend should be all better!!!!!!:-)
I was very lucky I had that slip of pachunia! Pachunia means paper in Avator language. As soon as Gabriella was all better we put the Thornys in a -23 degrees freezer.
We were all happy after we scooted out of Thorny Dessert. It was getting late so we all camped out for the night and then would go to the last state in The Future.
The next morning I suddenly realized that we had 2 months until Avator to go. I could barely believe it! My heart would explode! But I calmed down and started traveling toward the next state. We spent 16 hours traveling ‘til we finally got there at dusk. There was no sign. But we went in anyway.
ReplyDeleteWe entered through a cave of long black streamers. After we got through it all my friends were giggling and grinning like they knew where they were. But I knew I shouldn’t ask. When we got there it was home. But not The Little Cherry Town. It was Drucatlo. Where I lived for 1 day.
It was the day I was born. My parents loved me. They were my old parents. Their skin was blue. They too, were from Avator. I once had blue skin. But now I don’t. A day after I was born. Somebody thought my parents were weird and decided to kidnap them. He took them away to a unknown land and when the police went there to find them, he found them in a bush, a bush of deadly poison ivy. And that’s how they were “you-know-what”. The police turned my skin a normal color and gave me too my great great aunt and uncle. I then lived a long, lonely life.
Anyways. It was my room and my parents were there. Waving too me. Smiling. I couldn’t help but grin. My grin turned into a smile. Then it turned into an open mouthed happy smile. I ran and jumped into their arms! But all of a sudden they turned into a huge monster! Ahhh!
Me and my friends were shooting archery arrows at it but nothing could stop them! I knew what this state was! It was the Transformed Happy Memory State! Oh no! I didn’t have the right equipment! They gave me a wand. I stared at it not knowing what to do. But then magic spells started coming to me. Sir Arthur said “Use the wand! Your parents were witches and Wizards! Booah!” he said this while dodging the monsters tail. While running I looked at the wand, then my friends. The wand, my friends. The wand, my friends. I then ran ahead stopped, put my wand into position, pointed it at the monster and said “Ridiculous!” The monster then had roller skates on and he was slipping crazily! I laughed. Then he turned into a whoopee cousin and sailed through the air! I couldn’t help but giggle again. All my friends were staring at me, but smiling. All of a sudden we felt a bump and a rise. We then knew we were going on the plane to the final state until Avator.
The speaker said “Congratulations! You have completed the Future. You are now going to a grave yard. Where the final state will be. Just a hint about the state. You will be facing Voldemort. Thank You for riding Jungle Stages.”
I was exited yet very, very, very, very, nervous about going to the final state. But I guess I did find out I was magic!
TO BE CONTINUED....
Chapter 6
ReplyDeleteThe Final Stage
When we finally arrived at Sandarian Graveyards I looked around and found misty stones saying R.I.P. Then I found a rather spooky one with the letters TOM MARVALO RIDDLE. It was Voldemort’s father’s tombstone. It was very large and had a huge dementor holding an ax on the gray dried grass. I could see that there was a twist already. I knew it because I saw a little note on the ground that said:
Dear Sierna,
We have put a little twist in your final stage. We couldn’t help notice that your alien friend Mirabella wanted to make you a prisoner in space. Where you can breathe but not behind bars. So I invited Mirabella to come and be on Voldemort’s side for just a little bit. And she said that she would certainly try and fight you for victory! I wasn’t stunned by this, but……………. OK! I was so scared! I-I don’t want you-o to get hurt and, and! I certainly definitely don’t want Mirabella to put you behind bars in space! So I just hope you can make it.
Sincerely,
Jenny
Government of Mystic and Magical Fights
1-800-magic-n’-mystic
So. I got my pack ready just in case I had to be behind bars in space. But then, I took out my wand ready to fight! I then would be champion! I heard the misty groans of wind behind me. I then heard a hiss! I turned around and saw Voldemort about to fly through my body. But I quickly jumped out of the way for my dear LIFE was in danger. I spoke up to Voldemort, ready for action with my wand in position “Are you ready to fight me? Just because I have blue skin it doesn’t mean I’m chicken. You know that? Huh?” I was so scared about what I had just blurted out! I wasn’t sure what to do next but fight. As I looked scared, he mentioned, “Ha! Well you are chicken actually! Ha! So, we fight on 3. 1, 2……….” I was so scared. My heart was beating as fast as a road runner running in a 1 billion mile marathon that only gave you 1 minute to run! Before he said 3, I got an idea! Behind my back I snatched up a barrel! “3!” Voldemort screeched! I held my wand out so firmly that it started to crack! I gasped in horror and quickly shook up the barrel! I counted to three inside my head and then pointed the barrel at Voldemort! He was so surprised!!!! In the barrel was cream soda! I laughed my head off as he started to suffocate. But he was still alive after that! But then he just disappeared! Never to be seen again.
“Wow! That was great Sierna!” All of my friends exclaimed after going over to the Avator gates. But before I could answer I proclaimed “I would just like to go to Avator actually! And my wand broke.” A teardrop watered my eye. Sir Arthur handed me a red velvet box. I opened it and found a golden wand! I jumped up and down and twirled around! It was going to be great in Avator!
Chapter 7
The Gates to Avator
I approached the gates to Avator. I put one hand on each gate, and…….. PAKOW!!
It was Avator! The land that would make me live! I cannot explain how happy I am! Once we checked into Avator we bought a hotel room for until we build a house. Our location would be in the Sun Forest. It is a lush blue forest with a beach on its countryside. The hotel was amazing! There were sweets which I love! But then I heard some surprising news. My friends who helped me get here would leave, on January 1st of next year. It was the worst birthday news ever. I knew they would have too stay though! They do not have the special powers that I do! But that would be rude! So I will have to face it, I will no longer have my friends again.
Despite my sadness, life in Avator had been great! I went all kinds of new places! Such as the Mocking Bock! Which is the mall. But tomorrow I faced a big decision.
When I went to the Somfiyah room I had to decide whether I wanted to stay here for the rest of my life and have children if I desire. Or go back to my home. I decided the decision. Loud and clear, for all to see and hear.
Chapter 6
ReplyDeleteThe Final Stage
When we finally arrived at Sandarian Graveyards I looked around and found misty stones saying R.I.P. Then I found a rather spooky one with the letters TOM MARVALO RIDDLE. It was Voldemort’s father’s tombstone. It was very large and had a huge dementor holding an ax on the gray dried grass. I could see that there was a twist already. I knew it because I saw a little note on the ground that said:
Dear Sierna,
We have put a little twist in your final stage. We couldn’t help notice that your alien friend Mirabella wanted to make you a prisoner in space. Where you can breathe but not behind bars. So I invited Mirabella to come and be on Voldemort’s side for just a little bit. And she said that she would certainly try and fight you for victory! I wasn’t stunned by this, but……………. OK! I was so scared! I-I don’t want you-o to get hurt and, and! I certainly definitely don’t want Mirabella to put you behind bars in space! So I just hope you can make it.
Sincerely,
Jenny
Government of Mystic and Magical Fights
1-800-magic-n’-mystic
So. I got my pack ready just in case I had to be behind bars in space. But then, I took out my wand ready to fight! I then would be champion! I heard the misty groans of wind behind me. I then heard a hiss! I turned around and saw Voldemort about to fly through my body. But I quickly jumped out of the way for my dear LIFE was in danger. I spoke up to Voldemort, ready for action with my wand in position “Are you ready to fight me? Just because I have blue skin it doesn’t mean I’m chicken. You know that? Huh?” I was so scared about what I had just blurted out! I wasn’t sure what to do next but fight. As I looked scared, he mentioned, “Ha! Well you are chicken actually! Ha! So, we fight on 3. 1, 2……….” I was so scared. My heart was beating as fast as a road runner running in a 1 billion mile marathon that only gave you 1 minute to run! Before he said 3, I got an idea! Behind my back I snatched up a barrel! “3!” Voldemort screeched! I held my wand out so firmly that it started to crack! I gasped in horror and quickly shook up the barrel! I counted to three inside my head and then pointed the barrel at Voldemort! He was so surprised!!!! In the barrel was cream soda! I laughed my head off as he started to suffocate. But he was still alive after that! But then he just disappeared! Never to be seen again.
“Wow! That was great Sierna!” All of my friends exclaimed after going over to the Avator gates. But before I could answer I proclaimed “I would just like to go to Avator actually! And my wand broke.” A teardrop watered my eye. Sir Arthur handed me a red velvet box. I opened it and found a golden wand! I jumped up and down and twirled around! It was going to be great in Avator!
Chapter 7
The Gates to Avator
I approached the gates to Avator. I put one hand on each gate, and…….. PAKOW!!
It was Avator! The land that would make me live! I cannot explain how happy I am! Once we checked into Avator we bought a hotel room for until we build a house. Our location would be in the Sun Forest. It is a lush blue forest with a beach on its countryside. The hotel was amazing! There were sweets which I love! But then I heard some surprising news. My friends who helped me get here would leave, on January 1st of next year. It was the worst birthday news ever. I knew they would have too stay though! They do not have the special powers that I do! But that would be rude! So I will have to face it, I will no longer have my friends again.
Despite my sadness, life in Avator had been great! I went all kinds of new places! Such as the Mocking Bock! Which is the mall. But tomorrow I faced a big decision.
When I went to the Somfiyah room I had to decide whether I wanted to stay here for the rest of my life and have children if I desire. Or go back to my home. I decided the decision. Loud and clear, for all to see and hear.